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Re: Quick Meal - Short Story
Let's keep this thread for reviews, guys. If you want to talk this over, take it to private messages.
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: James Cooper Markel
Hi Quibbons. I'm Conrad. So, I'm having a hard time following your work. You try to have a good start, but you go start to use longer sentences without breaking ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: An Untitled Work in Progress
Hi there Lindsey. I'm Conrad. Well, I have to admit that for a start, this is a very good one. I can honestly say that if this was a novel ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: That magic - A short story.
Hi there Random. I'm Conrad. So, I have to agree with the assessment of the person above me. This piece seems more like it would be better as a poem ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: A New Hop in Clyss
Hi there, Jenthura. I'm Conrad. So, I didn't get too far in this and already I'm apprehensive. Why? One sentence did it for me. “What in Faulk was that, cap’n?” ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Quick Meal - Short Story
Hi there Laurence. I'm Conrad. So, I'm looking at this, and trying to find a plot in it. I'm not having a lot of success. You don't give us a ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: YWS INVADES MAOIST CHINA
I have been waiting for this call my entire video game playing life. :D
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Mine
Hi OverEasy! Wow. I really loved this poem. You've weaved a large amount of emotion into the words you crafted here, and it really shows. your flesh, becoming all but ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Is Star Wars Fantasy or Sci-Fi?
Well, I am mistaken. I thought that this was merely an idea of academia. That was presumptuous of me, and I see that my reasoning was somewhat flawed.
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Is Star Wars Fantasy or Sci-Fi?
Personally, I think Star Wars is science-fiction. And I think the reason that it's sometimes called fantasy is because of people in English departments who don't want to admit to ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: The Man and the Moon
Hi Kylan! Thought I'd drop in for a review today. What's this? You wrote a sci-fi type story? *reads* Very interesting, I have to say. Not quite the sci-fi I'm ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Closing the Chatroom?
I think so, Dreamer. If it could run and not lag, then it would probably work just fine.
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Blurb of "Tainted Life"
Hi Calmal. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this does seem an awful lot like just a prologue. It sets up a history, details some ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Closing the Chatroom?
The different rooms idea sounds all right. Though, enforcing why people were in those rooms, like, making sure they were only in there for certain things like reviewing, might be ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Report a good member!
Kamas was completely awesome in chat last night, running Apples to Apples for the mods. She gets mad props, in my book. :)
Nov 2, 2009
